Peer Revision

Unfortunately, I didn’t get much out of my peer revision, because there were not enough participates. I am hoping that in my next class we will be able to do a peer revision. What I would hope to get out of the peer revision process is better classroom participation, that way we can all benefit. I really need a peer revision because I feel that my first draft is too long and I need to cut and shrink my paper before it turns into another book. I really need someone to look at my paper and help me point out where I am straying too far from the thesis, along with all the grammatical errors. I do think peer revisions are important and I hope that we can have a peer revision at our next class.